Hello! I am making a game and the builder built this, the builder is @MGamer_Dev! If you can please tell us feedback and how we can impove it! Thanks for reading.
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Looks great! Especially the Mona Lisa painting XD.
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The build looks good as I like the theme they went for, however there are some things which can be improved on.
First thing I notice is that the build uses colors (even though it is meant to be cartoon-y low-poly) which in my opinion are far too bright. I would suggest using less bright colors.
^ Also, I don’t understand what the surrounding terrain is meant to be. You should make the grass more flat.
^ Another thing is notice is the building which says “kitchen”. I don’t think there would be a building called kitchen as the kitchen is a room inside the building but not the building itself. I would call it something else for example “restaurant”
Overall it looks good and the builder did a decent job, but there are a lot of things which can be improved on and it seems a little bit rushed.
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Quick question. Green and brown are not bright colors. and the grass is flat…
Pretty sure he means that the brown and green colors you used were bright.
The builds are fine in my opinion, though the lighting is weird to me and the paintings feel out of place. The shop is very empty and also the sign isn’t centered. The “employees only” sign is a bit too rotated for my liking (though this is a minor nitpick). Try adding shelves or crates in the Shop, since it would make it look a lot nicer.
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Actually they can be. Different colors are not fixed as there are different shades of every color. The colors you (or the builder who built this) chose are too bright in my opinion. I think you should choose one that is a little less bright than the ones in the current builds.
I think these colors would look better. (“Sea green” and “Nougat”).
Also sorry if I am being overly critical.
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Okay I will fix those issues.
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it’s fine you’re just giving your feedback.