Hello there, I have just completed a city hall for my group, and I’d like some feedback on it.
Thanks
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I think it looks great! But if you’re going to allow people to be able to go inside it would be small. Try make the scale bigger a bit but other than that it looks fantastic!
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This is a wonderful city hall you have created the effort put into this really shows. This is detailed to specify what a city hall looks like. I suggest adding in furniture inside and rooms which city halls would have for example a conference room if a conference were to take place. Overall great work and keep the amazing work up!
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I think it’s really good, but it could do with some custom textures.
This is a texture I use for bricks (Brick Decal - Roblox) with a scale of 7x7.
Also maybe you could add a small overhang type thing on the roof for more detail.
Best of luck!
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Greetings, I would like to give some feedback for your City Hall Build.
First of all, maybe make the word ‘City Hall’ to be a little bit bigger and visible, because if this model is applied to a game, with an ability to turn to day to night, the wording would not be much visible at the nighttime because it’s a little bit small in my opinion, I would also suggest you change the colors of the wording to be yellow.
I would also suggest, if you could make your glass doors to have a color that’s a little bit blue, it would be greatly appreciated as the door appears to be open, and the material you used dosen’t very much reflect the door, honestly, the glass door can’t be seen, and it would look it lacks a glass door and is open.
Apply some bluish-transparent material for the door, and as for the windows, maybe make it a little bit whiter to make the windows more visible.
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Overall it looks nice, But it lacks detail. Take a look at just the windows, They look pretty bland and boring, You could take inspiration from real windows and see the the design features they have then implicate it to your school. But yeah, Looks pretty nice.
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It looks great! But in my opinion I recommend adding more detail and a bit of realistic building, as it gives a better look. Hope this helped, have a nice day. 
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Some of the previous replies mentioned this, but I think to ‘spice it up’ a bit, it could use some detail. Get some reference images from some of those those antique-looking, city halls that you see peppered around the USA – A ‘rustic yet clean’ look would fit this perfectly. Good job so far.
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This does not appear to be anywhere near a finished product.
As others have pointed out this building seems too small to be recognized as a City Hall. To expand upon that, it feels 1-Dimensional and lacking. There could perhaps be several wings alongside the main wing of the building that you already have constructed. The windows look out of proportion and perhaps too wide. Windows should not be on the front side of the building only, as well. Apparently there is a door, as someone pointed out but I’m afraid I could not see it. You might want to try adding a frame if it’s a glass door.
From what I can see, there is no interior whatsoever besides flooring and the roof. Furnishing the building is a must, having it be empty serves no purpose but to convince the player that they are in 2008 ROBLOX. There should be a lobby, offices, restrooms, multi-purpose rooms, maybe even an auditorium, etc.
The columns inside the walls are too large to not have any amount of detail on them. The roof should have more details and shouldn’t be so plain. I’d suggest adding walls around the roof and making and entrance to it on either side of the middle roof, which should also be expanded upon. You can add vents and pipes to the roof. I believe someone has pointed it out but the words “City Hall” are definitely too small and need to be resized. You should also consider adding a sort of plaque behind it to embolden the words and give it a more regal look.
The back side is completely barren. I know it’s not very important but an attempt should be made to add some details to it.
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