[FEEDBACK] City

Hello everyone! I recently made a city map and I would like some help to how I could improve it.

Edit - Don’t go on about the purple building, that’s a placeholder for a future building. I want feedback on all the other ones (the complete ones)

Here are some photos of the city:





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The city looks good but it looks a little plain, for example in the final image the purple building just looks like a purple rectangle.
I would also suggest maybe adding some pictures of the forest/park area.

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The purple building is just a placeholder brick until that final one is done.
Also I’m not looking for feedback on the park at the moment, just the city.

Really love the design you are going for here, one thing I would change personally though is possibly fixing the buildings that are clipping onto the sidewalks. i would also try to mess around with the lightning to match the game, and possibly fit the style of the buildings more. Other than love it so far!

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Thank you for the feedback, I’ll try to edit the lighting.

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the city looks good, but you should work on the decor.

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Well, to be honest, in my perspective your city looks fine and classic.
Though I would recommend you to add some billboard ads or other signs that says ‘open’ in building windows to make it a little bit more lively.
I would also want to recommend you add some traffic lights and traffic signs to make the scene looks more realistic because the street looks a little bit dull, also I would suggest you add a bus stop.
I hope you improve your development because if players play your game they would probably criticize the developmeng so I would really recommend you improve your development for this game.

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I would say not to make yout buildings so vibriant since the terrain has a lack of color
and make sure to add windows and doors, here are some suggestions of mine
overall good work! :white_check_mark:

  • Tone down the color of the buildings and keep the colors of the windows

  • Work on the architecture of the buildings unless it’s suppose to have a futureistic feel

  • Fix the lighting on the city because the city hasn’t have any sort of shadows which is off putting
    to the rest of the cities background.

  • Also the lighting background like in image 3 is too dark so you should brighten up the map.

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i also agree with @hbk193. the buildings are a bit too plain. Maybe add a texture or something? Otherwise it looks amazing! Great work!

I think the colored buildings are pretty cool, it has a very interesting and attracting style. But I would’ t say it matches with the road decal you’re using. I might look into making your own road using techniques you’ve used in the buildings.
Also I would edit the ground level to with more details. These will matter the most as its more accessible to the characters.

Some things you can add along the street to improve the build

  • Trees
  • Trash cans
  • Benches
  • Street lights
  • Signs
  • Traffic lights

Some things I would change up

  • Adjust your lighting settings so the buildings aren’t as bright
  • Add some texture to the buildings, as others have said they look a bit plain as of now
  • Consider changing the skybox, that’s something that really sets the mood
  • For the buildings specifically, try making some windows dark as if some of the rooms don’t have lights on inside

Thank you to everyone on the amazing feedback! I’ll be making edits to the city based on everyone’s feedback tomorrow and see how it looks. :slight_smile:

City looks good overall, but try adding some stuff @reallyweirdperson explained.