Hello All,
I’ve been working on a clothing store but I am mostly skilled in coding and not in building so I’m asking you guys for feedback on my clothing store for my group. Feel free to give me suggestions on what I should add and what I should change.
In my opinion, the outside is not as good as in the inside. The doors/windows at the front look nice, but the building shape itself reminds me of a big Target or Walmart instead of a sleek clothing store. On the inside, the floors are an interesting dark color, but the walls are too minimalist and white. You did a great job with the signage text at the front as well as the clothing racks though. I think just make it smaller and make the building’s exterior have some sort of modern architecture to vibe with the black-white minimalist style you have going.
I was thinking of making a more modern version of it with the mostly glass design like restaurants and houses today. But thank you for the feedback!
Feedback; Honestly It needs improvement the Free Models or “Just there to fill up space” are really bad, as some people put virus into them. Secondly It’s empty, and I don’t like how when you buy a shirt it doesn’t show in the leader board and that you have to “Rejoin”. The last thing is the walls inside, you kept them white I do like the fact on how you said that you were planing to do a “White” and “Black” theme. However I’m impressed how the phenomenal building was! Nothing other that I loved the shirts they looked very well made. Keep it up! 
Thank for the feedback! The problem with showing it on the leaderboard is that if I constantly try to keep it update it, it would cause the game to lag due to the code going through a loop constanly. The code checks if a player owns the shirt through the MarketplaceService and will update when you rejoin the game. I have thought of just making it add a value to a leaderstat but that wouldn’t be as true as a real check.