I recently made a GFX (commission) for the game “Bullet Hell”. The reason for this forum is to simply ask for feedback and / or constructive criticism, as I would like to know what I could improve on.
Thank you!
(Also, I didn’t make the icon in the bottom left - it was an asset he provided)
Very good GFX! One thing that throws you off is the face of the player, he is happy yet its a bullet hell game. I suggest changing the face to something more “angrier.” Other than that, good job!
Nice job! One thing that seems a bit weird is the grass. It looks like an image cropped onto the ground, and doesn’t look very good as it’s a bit blurry. I would recommend using meshed grass in Blender, (if you used that, of course), so it looks better. Good job!
I think you can edit the hat to be not collided with the hair and you could try to use bump maps. I think bump maps would be make this perfect. I really like what you did except the hair.
I had a reference image and a given asset and I didn’t want to adjust it too much or it would take away the overall theme of the character. I’ve never considered using a bump map but I’ll give it a try.