[FEEDBACK] Fantasy-like Floating Island (First Ever Project)

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Hello All,

In this post, I show my first ever project that I have done. I would love some feedback to help improve my project and to make it way better than it is right now.

(Fantasy-like Floating Island Pictures):

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Finally the game: Island 7 SHOWCASE - Roblox

Thank you for reading and giving me feedback,

Skull

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The island itself looks great, however there are a few things that can be fixed.
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Since those “particles” are smoke from the fire, you should use a particle emitter so the particles move/spin and rise like smoke does. Smoke doesn’t just stay still!

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For that waterfall, I do not recommend you use the Roblox water since it doesn’t have the effect of a waterfall at all. Also, try to make something down there to “collect” the water instead of just having it end in the middle of the sky. This plugin is pretty good for making realistic waterfalls, you should give it a try: Waterfall Generator - Roblox

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#3

Thank you so much for the feedback!

#4

No problem! Good luck on your project!