Hello, this is some GFX I made for my game. Let me know what you think of it and what I can do to improve it.
Thanks to anyone who gives feedback!
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It looks great! The text and the character looks super clean and neat, I don’t see a change for this at all!
Overall, it is a cool GFX thumbnail for your game, nice work! 
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Looks good! Just a few pointers:
The police baton seems to be floating. It’s also a bit hidden behind the text, so it’s not exactly clear what’s there.
Personally, I would flip the order of the text layers (have “United Kingdom” overlap “London” instead of the other way around, etc.), but that is largely a stylistic preference.
I do like the font you’ve chosen and the character render looks great. Nice work here!
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Great work, here’s some feedback!
I assume this is C4D I suggest learning how to make more detailed lighting and adding a bump to the character as well as reflections, and cuffs and tasers have reflections. Other than that very good posing
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It’s actually all done in Roblox studio then rendered in blender, I will try experimenting with lighting.
Thanks for the feedback.
It looks pretty good! I would suggest moving the baton to the other hand as it’s hard to see behind the text and it blends in pretty well with the background. I would also recommend removing your username as it doesn’t add anything to the picture.
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Looks very nice, maybe try slitghly bluring out the background also switching the baton to the other hand since it gets lost behind the text, thats a excellent GFX though.
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Render and everything looks fine, the major issue here is positioning;
Firstly I dislike how close-together the text is, it’s almost very distracting;
Secondly, the police baton appears to be floating
Thirdly; the police hat is also weirld positoned
That being said, everything else is great, it would still work, those were just some things that personally bothered me, you need to work on your positioning more.
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Nice render, maybe worth using more complex lighting like HDRI’s to make the render look nicer.