Hey, recently come into GFX.
Feedback or thought about it? Thanks.
Here is the new version!:
That looks great! Although I would make the soldiers less blurry so we could see them better and the think that says WC in the lower left corner looks like some graffiti on a bathroom stall at a gas station.
Oh, its meant to be ‘inc’ as my developer name. I will change it now since it looks like WC 
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It looks good for a first gfx but the effects makes it very hard to interpret and understand what is going on.
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Extremely well done! I do have to agree with @croblarx though, the soldiers are a bit blurry but it’s cool!
Amazing for a first time. I’m not great at something like this, surprised you did it. I’m guessing you got a black hole from a tutorial, since I’ve seen that sort of black hole and made it before.
Ive done blackholes on blender before. I dont have a good computer so I didnt make a blackhole in the situation. Takes too much CPU. I did it on another render and photoshopped it in the GFX. Your blackhole looks really nice! 
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way too many overlays, distracts you from the character.
It’s insanely good but I would say reduce the opacity in all the effects in front of the soldiers. It is pretty hard the see the soldiers. I love how the background matches the scene. Good job!