Hello everyone, my name is Fayzulloh!
I wanted to try out low-poly builds, and this is what I made in about 45 minutes.
Tell me what I need to improve on!
Heres my first low-poly build:
Shadows on:
Shadows on:
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Maybe add a sign on o the building in the front if you are trying to go for a western look. And if there is a inside could you show pictures of it?
I’m So Sorry about this but you cannot rate the model:
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so you cannot rate or this discussion will be close down and the model of it really good but i think you must make a roof for it…
i think that all and always don’t put word “rate” in this topic or any topic you create. so… that all for now and i will see you next time…
Seeya!
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It looks pretty good so far since this is your first attempt at creating this kind of design, however in my opinion, I would recommend adding a more proper window at the moment the building looks rather empty as it doesn’t hold that much detail on it.
Maybe you could add some boxes or barrels on the porch if your going for a type of western build add some small chairs by the door giving it more detail and possibly add more things on the roof like some barrels on the roof or things around the building I would try adding more color.
I believe it could use some improvements you could definitely add a overhang roof with some wood planks and some material as it seems rather large and empty on the building. The windows I don’t think it matches with the build as it seems a little bit out of place, I personally would make them straight and try changing the color of the frames those are just some small suggestions you could take.
Other than that it looks quite good.
This is your first low poly build? This is quite amazing but as someone else said, add some text. It’d probably be better to add steps instead of a ramp as well
This building is right for playing western
Cool, done, did through rolox?
Or through a 3d blender? I liked the construction.
But you still need to add some details.
Add realism to the supposedly old walls and so on.
And make more chewed up like that.
Well, in principle, I really liked the bro without a doubt.
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Really good first low-poly build! I rate that a 8/10 and i would pay 300-400 robux for that.
i have some feedback
- Make a sign on the top so it looks more attractive.
- Make a square door instead of half circle shapes.
- A bigger build.
Looks really good! For a first time, really good. Especially if youve used blender, that can be hard to master! Well done 
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