FEEDBACK - First weapon

I made my first weapon, I chose a tommy gun.
But there’s something strange about it which I can’t pick out, what do you want changed or added?

[the white things are not part of the gun.]

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Hello there.
It looks not too bad, a few things you can change:


So the cylinder at the bottom could be made a different color

The two white things at the top, I have no clue what they are so I say remove them. And then just tidy the gun up and it’ll be ready to animate!

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the two white things are something different, not part of the gun.

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it looks aweome, but try to use blender

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Make the magazine bigger and make the weapon more round.

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Looks nice, but I do think the magazine should be a metal kind of color. With the grip, the little inlets are a bit too pointy, I would make those smaller. The last thing i’d recommend, is rounding the gun up a bit by using wedges on the corners.

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Not a bad Build, I’ll recommend using a photo for reference next time get the shapes right
and I’ll also recommend to try to use Blender it really helpful when it comes to making guns!! https://www.blender.org/ .You should also check out this video by Blender Gruu he will teach you the basics of blender!! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TPrnSACiTJ4

Sight, the awesome donut tutorial! Useful not gonna lie, also “new users friendly”. Anyway @fayzulloh, the gun is really good and awesome to be made on Studio, but as @CPUVertulaization said I prefer to use Blender when it comes to guns and detailed stuff since Studio doesn’t offer the same as Blender. Altought, Blender is for 3D and is specialized on that, so I recommend Blender.

Keep the hard work, you can see or google “How to make a gun on Blender” and you’ll have tons of tutorials. Or learn how to use Blender and try it your-self.

Have a nice day buddy.

:clap:Good design! Almost thought that was a free model. Keep up with the good work!

I rate it a 8.5/10

Not sure what type of style you wanted to make it but if it’s low poly it looks nice. If you were going for a more realistic look I’d make the gun less blocky. It’s hard to make a gun with parts on Roblox that why a lot of gun makers use 3rd party programs like Blender or Cinema 4D

Howdy ! For a Begginer this is very good ! You can try to put more textures ! You can try to add a little more details but honetely this is very good :wink:

Looks pretty good. Except the clip being wooden, when it would probably be metal or a mixture of the two; if you’re not going for factual looks and more so just the model, then it’s fine of course.