Hello, this is my first post. I’m a basic builder and looking for feedback on this build I created a few days. What improvements should I make/change? Your input would be greatly appreciated, thanks.
Game Link: Amshire Islands [SHOWCASE] - Roblox
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First of all, welcome!
I would like to say that it is a really nice build with a nice combination of concepts. I would like to leave some criticism for you to improve with the building style.
I think you need to work on synergizing the roblox terrain materials a bit better, the pavement material does not seem to work in my opinion and you could be better off just using ground and then adding some detailing with the parts, try to limit yourself to certain materials since I think you’re using too many in this build. Also, try to keep yourself consistent with detailing across the map as the first house has alot more detail compared to the second one. I think you could try to add a different light and gradient to the scene, maybe play around with the fog and changing hues as well as adding a bit of bloom shouldn’t hurt. You could also add some volumetric clouds to cover up the skybox a little bit to create an immersion of being high up in the clouds. Also, reference images can be helpful if you’re struggling to detail certain parts, take a look at different types of classical Japanese houses to get a better idea of what you can add to your buildings.
It’s a good build! though to be honest the terrain needs some work and the lighting looks very bland add effects.but overall very good build
I’ll make some changes with the lighting and change some terrain, thanks for the feedback 
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Try experimenting with some custom textures, to really make this look good. The windows in the second image need a little more detail, and I would also suggest experimenting with some more of the lighting features to make it look more realistic.
Apart from that, very good! Love the overall theme and can’t wait to see what you do to this!
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It look great but needs custom textures and terrain fixes great though!!
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This looks very nice, but Japanese “Torii”(red shrine gate) is a little distorted.
here is a example of it:
