marinusss
(marinusss)
#1
Can you guys please give feedback on this ad I made for a new game.
![whale ad4](//devforum-uploads.s3.dualstack.us-east-2.amazonaws.com/uploads/original/4X/e/c/e/ece0d897ce694c108b1dbee4d14c2c80838b8a8d.png)
What would be the chance you would click on this?
What would you change to make it more clickable?
Is it clear to you that the model is a whale?
UPDATE
Which one is better?
The last one or this one:
![whale ad5](//devforum-uploads.s3.dualstack.us-east-2.amazonaws.com/uploads/original/4X/0/e/1/0e190e2c636018d684c34c84a75e7054f29b5adb.png)
Logimite
(84pontiacdream)
#2
It looks like a narwhal. Make it look like a whale.
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Is it just me or is that not a whale?
I think the 1st one people would click (if you made it a whale), as the second one has barely any context
Anyways, good job. I can tell you made that outline on the text the lowest softness, so you should probably increase it a tiny bit.
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