I would really appriciate some feedback on a afghanistan house i made. 
I will take any feedback criticism, or not. Anything works.
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My suggestion would be to add some kind of depth to the build. As it is, the wall is extremely flat. Potential changes could be to make the walls thicker and put some kind of indented frame into the windows, or add some kind of panelling/wood supports along the wall (which would fit the desert-y, kasbah theme)
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Alright! Thank you for the feedback. I will try it out and post the results later. Thanks
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@anon81993163 Thank you for editing my post! I didn’t even notice it was the wrong one, Sorry!
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Oh hello once again @Zezzyxz
Concerning this building, i’d say it looks pretty simple.
First of all, i would recommend to take more pictures especially from far away so we can get an overall look of the whole building.
But from what i can see, i’d definitely suggest you to add more furniture in the inside, maybe a couple of stairs in front of the door.
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pretty basic but i like it great work
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The structure and use of material is properly designed you would normally see afghanistan house feature wall elements to either keep things in place, or to have some smaller details featuring in the exterior of the building.
While it’s a start I would recommend adding more objects on the building itself at the moment it holds the form and material. You should develop into adding important detail cracks in the walls holes - visible brick outline ect, at the start it looks a little early. However this buildings normally feature a basic structure form but you could at least give it some details to define the quality of it.
Did you use reference images? If so I would encourage you to gather a few and have by your side to gather the important details from it and incorporate them to your buildings.
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Maybe you can use more colors and materials, and adding detailed pillars.
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