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The purple streaks seem a bit out of place, and the texture on the building is a bit complex and visually distracting; but the overall composition is good, the eye is drawn to the eye line of the “player” subject.
All in all, I’d say try and remove the Purple/pink artifacts, perhaps a quick layer to desaturate or correct them
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Looks very good, what program did you use? One thing a slight detail maybe use a vignette(with black or blur) this would make you look at the object you want.
The reflections and general lighting are good.
The main changes I would make would be changing the posing for the character slightly, and adding more imperfections and features to the wall material. Perhaps it ought to be a different material inside the building as well. I would also think about adding depth of field, and maybe adding more light coming from the lampposts.
Very good render.
This is a good render, but it is lacking when it comes to textures. If I were you, I would add a PBR into your scene to replace your granite texture. I think the window should have a dark boarder around it.
I would also change the walls on the inside of your building, the granite doesn’t fit there very well. I would also suggest for you to decrease the reflectiveness of your lamp posts and make them look more dull, they look too shiny. For the purple lamp for lighting you have in your scene, I would recommend for you to remove it, it doesn’t really fit.
If you don’t have an HDRI, I recommend for you to add one. It can really help with the lighting in your scene. I also think you should ever so slightly increase the roughness on the glass. It looks like it’s not there. Lastly, I think you should add handles to your doors, they’re missing, and if they’re automatic sliding doors, add a sensor.
Everything else looks great and good luck!
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Thank you a lot! I appreciate your criticism.
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