I’m working on a tornado for my game.
Please give me feedback to improve it!!
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Pretty impressive; I think the dust cloud base could be a touch wider though.
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Looks good! Does it sound good, though?
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this looks awesome :o
its better than the tornado i made (╥﹏╥)
I’m still working on sound design.
But for now, not too good at this moment.
I can see that.
I’m not that good with particles, therefore I’m trying to figure out how I can make the dirt being picked up wider without making it taller.
do you have a clip of this in studio or a game we could check this out? looks very cool!
i’ll link a game.
keep in mind that i’ve been working on this for about like… 2 days, so don’t expect the best so far
i plan for this to be apart of a storm chasing game
This tornado looks awesome! Great recreation in Roblox! Will you make other natural disasters? What game will it be used in?
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Note: (I’m not a builder and I’m not trying to be rude in any possible way, just trying to help)
Honestly, I love it. But I do have a few minor suggestions. First of all, maybe try lighting the bottom cloud and maybe make the black particles a bitter more transparent.
Keep up the good work 
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storm chasing games
and no, i will not.
im merely working on tornadoes for that game
tnks for the support.
Very nice! I love it but I think there are still a couple things to improve:
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It’s kinda hard to tell it apart from the sky. If you could maybe make the colors a little lighter, I think it would look cooler.
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When I think of a tornado, I think about lots of swirling, although thats not really present here.
It looks very cool tho. Good job!
i dont think this is important as some tornadoes still have similar colors to the sky at some times.
you do realize that’s an image and not a gif or video
Ok! Just giving what came to mind.
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