I’m working on a tornado for my game.
Please give me feedback to improve it!!
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Pretty impressive; I think the dust cloud base could be a touch wider though.
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Looks good! Does it sound good, though?
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this looks awesome :o
its better than the tornado i made (╥﹏╥)
I’m still working on sound design.
But for now, not too good at this moment.
I can see that.
I’m not that good with particles, therefore I’m trying to figure out how I can make the dirt being picked up wider without making it taller.
do you have a clip of this in studio or a game we could check this out? looks very cool!
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i’ll link a game.
keep in mind that i’ve been working on this for about like… 2 days, so don’t expect the best so far
i plan for this to be apart of a storm chasing game
This tornado looks awesome! Great recreation in Roblox! Will you make other natural disasters? What game will it be used in?
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Note: (I’m not a builder and I’m not trying to be rude in any possible way, just trying to help)
Honestly, I love it. But I do have a few minor suggestions. First of all, maybe try lighting the bottom cloud and maybe make the black particles a bitter more transparent.
Keep up the good work 
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storm chasing games
and no, i will not.
im merely working on tornadoes for that game
tnks for the support.
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Very nice! I love it but I think there are still a couple things to improve:
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It’s kinda hard to tell it apart from the sky. If you could maybe make the colors a little lighter, I think it would look cooler.
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When I think of a tornado, I think about lots of swirling, although thats not really present here.
It looks very cool tho. Good job!
i dont think this is important as some tornadoes still have similar colors to the sky at some times.
you do realize that’s an image and not a gif or video
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Ok! Just giving what came to mind.
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Hello! I’m sorry for the long wait but I have recently resumed work on this project and I’m starting it from the base-up.
A new tornado system will be implemented too!
The current game will not have many features, as it’s practically still in pre-alpha.
I would like to come out and say that my biggest inspiration for this game was games like “RTS:C” and "Twisted". Many thanks to them for inspiration!
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:o I am excited! I actually just started playing Twisted again a few days ago with my little cousin. If there’s one thing I’d like to suggest, it would be to make the game feel more realistic by adding like furniture in buildings and houses if possible. That is one thing I really wish Twisted would do when you claim a house.
Good luck on your project!
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Furniture has crossed my mind, although… this could heavily affect performance and would make the project take longer to finish.
If I did, it may be a seperate place for the game. Some people may not be able to run such a thing.
Thanks for the good luck and excitement!
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