I decided on making an obby game to build my portfolio even though I have made a lot of games that I didn’t publish.
The game is 3 Hearts Obby
You can only respawn 3 times and once you used all of it, you have to go back to the start. Simple enough but my goal is to make the playtime longer.
3 Hearts Obby
Icons and thumbnails will be done after the main game is completed.
Any feedback and suggestions is appreciated!!
First thoughts:
- Colours are very washed/bright
- Obby way too hard for intended audience (kids on mobile) / movement speed to slow or gaps between jumps are too big
- takes too long to respawn
- Checkpoint area too big
- Dying on a stage skips it sometimes
- poor map design/ looks kinda ugly and hard on the eyes
- When you lose all hearts it says either “back” or “retry” and it charges money to retry, this makes it seem like player can’t play the game anymore unless he buys the retry which is 50 robux
Also, this game will never take off, it goes against what makes a game/obby fun. Addicting and easy gratification. Having to restart the entire obby just because you died 3 times will result in the player leaving the game 90% of the time.
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Thank you for the feedback!!
(Need more character)