Feedback for entity design

So i’ve started to work on a game called “Scp: manipulation” and I decided to make my own model for scp 173! Thanks for your feedback!

I will take criticism as long as it is helpfull!

peanut atttack.wmv (6.8 MB)

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Hey! Overall, this scp remodel looks good, but the body shape could use a little more work:
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Notice how its upper body is more three-dimensional? Your figure is giving too flat looks.
Also, I think that your model could look a bit less squigglier, if that makes sense: the legs should be modeled straighter.
Also, you did get all the facial features right, but they can also use a little more work (they seem too stretched, just to fit onto the whole head).

Overall, a good starter model which just needs some more polishing! 7/10.

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If you look at the original image for 173 has those same squiggly legs, but I will consider fixing up the design! Thanks for your feedback!

Also I was trying to make his face look stretched, and to look more imperfect?


Ive change the model a bit and got ended up with this, I also think I forgot to state that this model is a redesign and not supposed to look exactly like 173 but still captures the same vibe


added rebar to peanut!


Walnut :3

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