So I’m currently trying to improve my work and was wondering what you guys think so far?
My portfolio: iEternalChaos - Student, Interface Designer | DeviantArt
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I like them! The lighting is on point, I don’t see grain in any of them, and the titles are in the right place! Keep up the great work! 
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I like the outline and the lighting on it, also the texture pack. Amazing.
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Some good stuff you got there. Great job!
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The environmental texture lighting could be more realistic from blender, use HDRI’s (4k). Other than that the outline looks nice! Amazing Job.
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Looks good! What you should possibly look into is if you are using Cinema 4D, you should get “Octane Render”. The lighting will be much better, not that the lighting is bad but it will definitely add a more realistic feeling to it! But it looks good, keep practicing! 
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The concept of the designs are alright. Here is an example of where you’ve messed up all the other practice designs are good i’m normally focused on your newer design.
On the simulator design, the water is clearly odd looking on the ground next to her legs or being more clearer the (water splash) doesn’t really have that proper effect at of the bottom. This kind of looks like she stepped in a water puddle because the effect doesn’t have that resemblance of a water balloon effect hitting her.
The posing is bland, it’s not that attractive seen there doing it in the back of their house - friends house you should add more characters and have them in an open space, throwing water balloons at different characters just in the fact that it doesn’t look like a balloon fight (it looks more like there just playing a game in the back of there house).
I believe (in order to capture this effect there will be more then one Balloon hitting her) It looks like it’s only three characters that seem to be having fun, but I wouldn’t call this a balloon fight the shadows are good but there isn’t no water on the surface.
Overall, your designs look good at the start, I hope to see your improvements and you’ll become a great graphic designer in no time patience and practice is good to take along the process. 
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