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Hey i am luca (16) i show you my logo for jailbreak,
I hope you give me feedback
Logo
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You should add a background. It seems to be swallowed up by the white. The K has a weird black smudge:
It’s a good start!
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Personally I feel like the logo could be better. Firstly I would join the text and make the helicopter overlay the text in one corner. I would also add a glow around the logo itself and maybe add some glare to it to!
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ok thx for your feedback <3 
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ok great idea thx for your feedback <3
Looks simple!
Don’t worry, everything simple for me is awesome!
I like your logo, you could add some gradients to the logo, and more designs, like fire, buildings in the words, etc!
But i like the logo so far 
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thank you very much <3 Thats nice
It’s ok, maybe connect both words? Also if I were you, I would overlap the helicopter over the two (connected hopefully) words. It’s good for a beginner though.
Just wanted to say this, do not sell this logo or use it for commercial use. I’m pretty sure Jailbreak is a property of Badimo so if you did use this (commercially) then you would probably get DMCA’d.
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okay thanks for your feedback!
Hey there! Good start to the logo, here are some of my suggestions!
The text edges are very rigid, you way want to fix that. 
I like what you did with the helicopter, I suggest you connect them all or at least bring them closer togeather. Kinda like this
Hope this helps!
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It doesn’t look bad, however I feel like it’s a little empty. The text, also looks pretty bland, you should pick more of an exciting font.
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Okay Thank you for the feedback <3
Seems a little bland to me. The white does swallow the text and the helicopter up 
The text design is good, but I would like to see some little text at the bottom, like a caption or something. Maybe add some NPC’s in the background, and spice it up a little bit. But other than that, it looks pretty good 
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Helicopter looks very just uh, put in if you know what I mean. Other than that it looks pretty good.
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Looks simple and clean. Like what everyone else says, its a little too bland. Other than that, good work!
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