Hello there! I’m currently working on my personal project and I dome some lobby map.
I would like to hear some feedback or what I can improove on the map. The map is cartoon, Using unions,meshes,parts!
Thanks for any feedback!
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This is really nice! For feedback, the center’s a bit empty and maybe you should decorate it. You should also rotate the map walls a bit so it looks more natural.
It looks pretty good, but the place where the store is (namely, where the circle is) I recommend replacing it
Really cool build, Could do with a lot more work focusing on the detail and filling up a lot of the empty space that’s available. Well done, Keep it up!
Best Regards
This looks very good so far! Be sure to add some more greenery and nature to fill in the empty gaps around the map.
Adding on with what everyone else said, add more scenery. I can tell you know what you’re doing with low poly, and it looks great in that aspect! Biggest focus should be filling up empty to look more appealing on the eyes
Nice build! You should add more detail and fill in the blank spaces. I really recommend adding thin dark gray parts to the building’s walls to make it have a brick-like texture.
The build is alright for a beginner but for me looks too similar to a lot of simulator game lobbys.