This is my first building! I’m actually a scripter and decided to try something new.
3 Days ago I decided to start a new building project. Now it’s finished and I need some feedback. It is low poly and I tried to make it a bit cartoony. Here’s the link to the place:
https://www.roblox.com/games/4633985875/
Any criticism is appreciated!
Nova_MrRoyal
I really love this build! The telescope makes it like 1000 times better! Great work and good luck in your future projects!
Really loving how this looks! Great use of colors and the structure of the building itself. 
My only suggestion would be adding some form of environmental scenery such as trees, plants, grass, etc.
Yea good idea👌 I also planned to do that. I’m thinking of making a little village.
Thank you🙃 As I said I’m actually a scripter. Do you think it would be worth it spending more time in building?
Yes! 100 percent! Your work looks amazing! Keep in doing what your doing dude!
Nice work! I’d add some more bricks to the fireplace and a door leading out to the patio. Maybe a railing around the patio?? It seems too open to the world, I feel like patios are more private, outside residence areas.
Great job! Keep it up!
Adjust the flooring colour, this blends with a lot of the smaller models included in this build and it doesn’t really appeal to the eyes when represented like that.
Extend your colour variety used, try not to use as much brown like shown in the images. Nearly every object in the house is brown, you could try making some objects different colours instead of making them all the same main colour.
I tried to create a wooden style thats why. What colours do you suggest?
You could try adding some white into the build, this could adjust to fit the scene too.
It’s good! Better than I could ever do.
Nice build! I like the bright colors and especially the little flower pot you made there!
Additional to that, I suggest you change the color of the grass into a green of a bit darker shade, as the green seems to be overpowering the other colors of the house. Maybe you can do the same with the pink and yellow books. Experimenting with lighting, color correction and camera effects can help too. GLHF!
