Hello fellow devs,
I would like feedback on this:
(I already know about the skybox it is still in work)
Tell me your opinions below!
(I already know about the skybox it is still in work)
Tell me your opinions below!
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Hello 
This Looks Amazing And Is Looking Great
To Make It Even More Awesome Possibly Change The Grass To Smooth Terrain Or Add Some Windows Which Are Less Transparent Or Add Windows.
Everything else is great
keep up the good work 
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Thank you, i am just trying to get a traditional look.
Also this is my first build, so big thanks!
Too bad there aren’t many Filipino builders here.
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Assuming that you are a newer dev (sorry if I am wrong), I think you did not bad job. It is a great small project and it is fun. However, I do not advise wasting any money on advertising. It needs much more work before it is ready for the common crowd.
Suggestion:
- Rebuild most of the stuff. I know this may take a while, but everything is really low detail. There is no common theme or color scheme. Try to focus on detail where necessary. Add scenery or more detailed props.
Remember, I am telling you these thing to help you improve the game. I am not trying to hurt your feelings, I just am pointing out some of the things I noticed that could be slightly or heavily improved on.
I hope these tips help you, and good luck in the future of your games and development.
(I took part of this text from another comment to be clear, because i´m not that good in English)
- OndrejJePan
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That’s cool, I Think you spend lot time for build that. There’s need lot of improvement but… good job
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Thank you very much for the feedback.
And yes, i am a new developer here. And it is my first build. Thank you for the advice!
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I am confused. What do you mean by advertising?
The game is really new, it is still in development.
A lot of restaurants do this, they advertise their game to have more players, that was just little thing if you would have few robuxs for advertising.
I am not working on a restaurant game though.
This is together with a game that isn’t a restaurant game, sorry if you are confused.
Oh, sorry… My bad, thought it because the title.
Anyways have a great day!
- OndrejJePan
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Hello sir, looking at this, there are a few things to fix.
Maybe instead of using the default wood planks, change it to a more modern texture.
As well as maybe removing the background of the sign (The sign that says Philippine Restaurant" If you don’t know how, just take the file, and put it in this website.
Also the stairs are just a tad floating, so maybe fix that, overall, not bad!
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It’s quite plain, not something I would play. Try adding details, like textures and things.
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As a Filipino myself, I really like the style.
It really reminds of the a traditional Filipino style somewhere in the rural side of the country.
Try to add some details on floor and walls, maybe?
Keep up the good work. Love it.
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I think you should add more details into the table and chair to make it more great, you should change the color of floor or the walls cause it make it look kinda weird. But everything look good
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@2i_van, @Coldshot_Dev, @ScareDesert2, @Breakying, @Dylan_vul
Thank you for the wonderful feedback!
@2i_van
I was only trying to get that philippine traditional restaurant you can see in the country (which some are made out of that wood texture i am using). About the sign, you are right. I will fix that and… thanks!
@Coldshot_Dev, @Breakying
The details, i will work on that, thank you.
I also need to fix my color scheme. But like i said with the textures, i used wood for a traditional look.
@ScareDesert2
Magandang umaga!
Like the others said, details which i will work on. It is my first build. Salamat po!
@Dylan_vul thanks! Yes, i have to work on the color scheme, and add more details. And for the plants on the grass, i won’t be putting it there. This is for another game in Alpha.
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Looks overall great! Would recommend changing the tables and chairs to a different color or texture, as it cannot be seen very well with the floor. Definitely a traditional Philippine restaurant. Minor details will definitely make your game pop! I would definitely add some plants on the grass. Good luck! 
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Overall, the build is great! Especially the flag. However, I see some flaws in your build. You may want to make the restaurant bigger and decorate the tables with plants, cups, etc. You get the idea. Additionally, try and make the tables different colours, like white, for example. Making it brown makes it seem plain. Also, add some trees, roads, or lamp posts around the restaurant. But as I said before, overall, the build is great, don’t feel upset by those criticisms that I made. I’m not intending to upset you. Those criticisms are just for you to improve more next time. Keep up the amazing work!
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This is a nice start, I like the use of decals as well, I recommend having a play around with textures and brick size as it all looks to square.
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I Like the Filipino Restaurant you Build. It’s Amazing! keep up the good work 
But yeah, Thank you for reading this. have a nice day! 
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@Itz_Allxson thanks! Your feedback helped me a lot, thank you.
Oh, the road is just an example, i’m not going to use it.
@r_1cy I uploaded the decals myself. And yes i better play around with the textures and stuff. Thanks for the feedback!
@GMOGamer12 thank you so much! I’m happy you liked my build.
@1cyNix Sorry for late reply! Thanks for the feedback, i did not make all of the decals. I am also focusing on building something better as well.
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