These are my first GFX, I would like you to give me your opinion, to improve. 
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For your first GFX, it is kinda impressive.
However, ask yourself: What does my GFX resemble?
Is it a random GFX you made? Something for a game?
I just made it randomly, and i was bored.
And the second GFX is for my other roblox group.
These are really nice, the only thing I see is the text is affected by the shadows, is it meant to do that? Also, the lighting should be more alerting and brighter, so you catch the eye of the viewers.
This is one of my favorite “first attempts”. For this only being your first attempt, the lighting is surprisingly good. Keep it up
It looks great, try moving the light so you can’t see the source. add a flooring so it doesn’t look like it’s just floating around.
It’s good, but the text doesn’t fit with the style. Keep up the good work.
Also, a better program: Cinema4d.
before you made this did you learn blender?
Pretty good, I like it. However you should add more detail and items to it. Like this one below (not mine).
Of course I don’t expect that high quality from you, but my point was that you add more to your gfx, so people get interested whats in the background and etc… (pay attention to details).
Yes i did learn about blender.
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Okay thanks, for supporting me 
Okay thanks for the soluion.
Okay thanks for the solution
looks nice for a first gfx, i also like te bloom, good job on it.
There aren’t realy tips on it but if you wanna take it to the next step add some details like smoke passing the character, or sparkles and stuff. Good job on it
okay. thanks for supporting me