Feedback for my first gun animation

this is the first gun animation i have ever made and i would like people to give me feedback on it so i can improve it https://gyazo.com/3152a2465d4a250ad007577a8f01956e

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Looks nice but kinda flat. But for your first time is very nice! Try adding some motion to the whole body so it looks more smooth and natural. Good job!

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Pretty cool ngl’
9.9/10
0.1 point off because it looks like the Uzi
or whatever it is Is shooting to bullets and why Is it going in the air?

Correct me if its a shotgun pleaseimage

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i guess i overdid the character anticipation lol i will fix that thanks for the feedback tho

Looks simple yet looks good. You could fix the ParticleEmitter as @StarJ3M says. The ending, when he holdsters the weapon, looks kinda quick and unnatural.

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I also will request you making it so where ever the screen is aiming at then the player follows it and the gun so that the Uzi doesn’t look like it just goes in the air, Basically Shift lock the player automatically

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when it just goes in the air it gives off shotgun vibes cause usually a shotgun will go up in the air, Overall Good Job >:D

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it also gives me some deagle vibessss
lol

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I think your animation is great! Although I would keep the noob pointing the gun for just a bit longer after the discharge. But all and all! This is a pretty good first animation on a gun!

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