Feedback for my first map, abandoned school

Hello Roblox Dev Commmunity,

Info
I have recently made an map for my roblox game. It’s an horror type infection game. I am also not an builder, so it was hard to create. This is also my first ever map i made, so i wanted some feedback/ideas for the map? I am sorry if u see some dumb mistakes i made. Please tell them in the replies. I really need some ideas. The map is not finished yet, i just need some ideas :). Thank you already, hope everyone has an good day!

Note!
‘I did made the models all by myself, exept the apple and the text for the school board.’

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That looks great! I get it is abandon but I would add some things on the wall that a school would have but make that look like old like no one has been there for ages.

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Looks amazing
Feedback maybe try to add some books and papar to give it the look who ever was there left in a rush.
But over all great job

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Looks decent but I’m afraid that the pink goo on the floor is a little bit too thick.

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Thank you all for your ideas,
the game got an story line in it. So i also got some papers ready to spread around the map. I will look if i can make the ‘Pink Fluid’ less thicker and see if it’s better. I will also try to add more detail to the walls as: school notes, papers as i said earlier, information papers about the school, the map of the school as an texture.
Thank you so much for positive reply’s, i appericiate it :+1:

Yeah you we’re right!

Changed the size from the X Scale,
old - 0.750
new - 0.125


I personally think that the new one is better :smiley:

Thank you, @zenxatic

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