Feedback for my first project ever?

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#1

Hi.

Just less than two weeks ago I started learning Roblox Studio and I’ve been building my first game as I go. I went with a simple idea - just to recreate the Jorrvaskr from Skyrim and implement whatever cool ideas I could think of.

So far, I managed to script from scratch some menus, inventory and quest system, music, day/night time and I had planned some weapons with custom animations, but I’ll see about those later.

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The exterior is the first thing I built in a very long time, so that looks decidedly awful. Dunno why I thought using terrain to make walls would be a good idea, lol.

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The main attraction is the interior, though. I made all of the models (except for the battleaxe imported from Skyrim), and I especially like how the barrels and chests turned out.

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I also made a mini-quest with some cool effects for the NPCs outside. If you want two minutes of entertainment, here’s the link. https://www.roblox.com/games/6367646724/TES-V-Skyrim-Jorrvaskr-WORK-IN-PROGRESS

Most of all I want to know your opinion on this early iteration of my building style. I think I’ll be going for a mid-poly aesthetic, with semi-realistic lighting and a bit of clutter. What do you think?

Thanks for the read :slight_smile:

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#2

I tough that it was a joke and it wasn’t Roblox.
ma’am awesome work.
You said you started only 2 wee’ ago?? I’m in shock.
I see a brilliant future for you

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#3

Thank you! I have too much free time on my hands, that explains how I learned so fast, haha. I hope my attention to detail and polish pays off in the long run.

#4

This looks amazing! And its even your first project.

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#5

For your first project, it looks Amazing. the only complaint I got is I wish the Lighting was a bit better and in certain parts it feels a bit too blocky (But I don’t know if that was the intention ) but that is all I got, looks great.

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#6

This To Be Honest Looks Amazing. There are some things that could be better, But for a first project this is Great So Keep It up.

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#7

Thanks. Some of the larger parts could use more detail and better textures, I can see that. For the lighting, I’ve seen some fancy light rays and maybe some dust particles, if I could figure those out.