Feedback for my game

https://www.roblox.com/games/5683007150/Escape-Evil-Noob-Obby?refPageId=0c0c065d-f38a-4fbc-918d-b0b50689d480

Finished the game

It was pretty easy, all I had to do was jump and walk without any difficulties and there you have it, you finished the obby without dying. The game looks simple in terms of design, even in the kitchen, all I saw was a couple of plates, knives and fried chickens.

I suggest you move the guy, near the door perhaps? Knowing that the green is the only part that you could walk at, it would be a nuisance to players. Oh and by the way you could just use your camera to know which parts are fake so it makes the game easier as it is

If memory serves me right this is stage 6, there is no point in adding that two vertical parts if the player could just jump at the horizontal part without dying. Either add an invisible block or make it wider so the players couldn’t jump there

This is somewhere in the last stages, you should fix that.
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You should add another part in the sink ( The one that has an open space with just water streaming down ) so that it wouldn’t look like a waterfall, and since the water reached the floor, shouldn’t the floor be flooded already? Or at least it should start to flood.
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At first I didn’t realize that I finished the game, after all there was no sign saying that I finished the game ( I didn’t even see the guy that told me to escape )

Some suggestions:

Add challenging stages like moving parts and such

Add portraits to the wall since the rooms look pretty empty

Instead of using a block to surround the last stage I suggest using terrains (In low poly style since your game is a low poly styled game)
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The game starts with pastel colors but there are stages with pretty bright colors and it would make it seem out of place. Try changing the colors into something that blends in with the color theme you made

I have more suggestions if you want, but as of now, this is all I’m writing because this is getting quite long now. Wishing you the best of luck.

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Thanks for the feedback I’m going to fix it

Not going to lie, You could’ve spent more time decorating the stages
(we all started there,dont worry}
In the state your game is in now it looks like one of those games that could be found in the toolbox.

But i wish you luck, and i hope you keep updating and improving your game :+1:t2:

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Really unoriginal. I have seen almost the same type of game everywhere. I feel you should try to do something more original. But it’s built well. Can definitely be improved.

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