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#1

Hello,
I made a new gfx. Need feedback for this GFX. here is the pic:

my fav with sign
my fav with sign1920×1080 1.38 MB

That’s all
thanks for Reading

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#2

Really awesome creation! Push yourself, challenge yourself. Get more creative, think of something nobody else has to make this photo stand out even more than you think! You could easily achieve this. Best of luck! :smiley:

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#3

I just got an idea while writing this that I could add effects to the sabers.Thx for the feedback :smiley:

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#4

It looks nice. One thing I think you could inprove on is having better backgrounds, instead of having a plain black one. Also, the emmision effect is overdone and you should probably usee cycles render engine. Also the moon should be in the rule of thirds, because the composigion looks really akward right now.

#5

Other than this horizon:
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it looks nice. To fix the horizon, you could add some fog to hide the horizon.

#6

thanks for telling me Im go fix that :slight_smile:

#7

Everything looks good except the background. It should be like in the galaxy wars or something relating to galaxies.

#8

i tried to make it but when ever i add it to blender it crashes and my all progress lost.I tried this 2 more times the first time it crashed again and the second time it didnt crash but i was not able to find any good textures for it idk what to do with it can u help me?

#9

I first used cycles for the emmision but it didnt look at great it was not giving that saber glow that I have seen in movies.and at last i decided to use evee engine. for background i tried to add mars theme but my blender crashes.i m try again to use cycles for emmision

#10

In the compositor, use the glare node to add bloom. The article on bloom in cycles

#11

Make a dessert themed one, would fit nicer in my opinion but nice job!

#12

ok im try that also thanks for the feedback

#13

I’d say to improve posing, add background, improve grass. white light saber seem toooooo long also.

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#14

Im do that too thanks for your suggestion :smiley:

#15

I think the lighting is way too harsh for a night battle. Even though the lightsabers give off a lot of light, there is just too much light on the back of the hoodie dude. You’re shadows also seem pretty blocky, try using evee and go to shadows and add more to the pixel count. This is a good gfx.

#16

Really awesome looking, nice Job there :+1:t4:
However I think it is too bright for a night battle. Also maybe add in the pure black maybe some Stars or something, so that we don’t look in the Abyss.

#17

Try adding a background through a image editing software

#18

thanks for the reply i will surely add these

#19

I think there is a bit too much light,you could obscure just a little bit

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