Feedback For My Modern Styled GFX

So I made a gfx styling it after modern typed designs, what do you think. I think it is ok, though there is some thing is missing.

You thoughts? (And tell why down below…I mean, if you want)
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Also, anyone have any suggestions on how to improve?

Maybe make the “Montone” text less bold like the other fonts.

Besides that, this is awesome. Great job man!

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Do I know what’s happening in the photo? No.
Am I amazed by it? Yes.
Nice work!

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This better? :eyes:

Why am I thinking of Calvin Clein ads :laughing:

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Yeah, it looks good now. Nice job.

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This is amazing! The only thing is that it is a little hard to see the white text. Adding a black stroke might make it easier to see it. But I’m in love with the effects.

Great job!

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My only complaint is the smoke effect, as the smoke looks too thick and bunched up together.
Lighten the smoke and add a bit of transparency and the render would look much better.

Other than the smoke and text it’s not bad.

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This is really good, nice job!!!

Keep the great work up my fellow ROBLOXAINS!!!

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I have no control over the smoke but i can lighten the transparency :+1: