Feedback for my MVP Games

Hello! I have 5 games that I would love to get some feeback on! Please reply any of your comments, suggesstions or any other feedback. I really appreaciate it!

Here are the games:

  1. https://www.roblox.com/games/6787733345/Monnet-Tree-Jump

  2. https://www.roblox.com/games/7142420763/Luffys-Playground

  3. https://www.roblox.com/games/7818865813/Wizards-Magic

  4. https://www.roblox.com/games/8899687538/Hunter-X-Simulator

  5. https://www.roblox.com/games/13470348704/Tower-Climber

I can’t wait for your valuable feedback!

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The only button that works is “Moonshadow Elves”. Nothing else works for me. It’s just some trees and I have no idea what to do.


This is fun. I think there should be a way to cancel the animation/grabbing. This would make it so you can get to areas easier/have more control. Maybe the distance of how far you can go should be limited, you can go quite far. Which, is cool, but you still might want to limit it for gameplay reasons.


Nothing in the game seems to work. The wands or the gun. I can equip them, but nothing happens when I click with them. The VFX orange thing looks kinda cool.


List of feedback:

  • This seems the most fleshed out. Looks cool. The jump noises overlapping is kinda annoying, but it’s fine.

  • Melee punching looks awesome. It looks like there’s a cooldown, but not a visual for that cooldown.

  • Strength training looks kind of weird when moving around, but it’s cool too. It stopped working through after maybe my 2nd use of it.

  • The animation for meditating looks good. Similar to strength training, I don’t think the player should be able to jump or walk around when it’s in-use.

  • Dashing is cool, it reminds me of BloxFruits. (I guess all the anime fighting kind of games, I’ve only played BloxFruits and like one other though.) Anyways, I’d mention that the player can dash in some form of UI, on-screen constantly or a tutorial or both. That’s for later down the line of development though.

  • The Beast NPCs are nice to fight, the damage taken to kill them is satisfying. They do spawn too quickly though, and could use some VFX and SFX.

  • The quest system doesn’t seem to work.

  • I can’t get to the other areas in the game as there’s no way to get there, or it’s no obvious.


I have no idea what to do in the game, I don’t think there’s anything here.


There were no significant errors I saw when checking the F9 dev console in any of the games. At least one had a failed to load audio thing, but yeah.

For most of them I found myself questioning if anything was there. I hope the feedback is helpful. :sweat_smile:

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Thanks for the feedback! I will be implementing your feedback soon! I have chosen to work on the luffy’s playground experience so please join the discord community to see any updates. I linked the discord community on the games page here: Luffy's Playground - Roblox
Can’t wait to see you in!

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Hey again! I decided to fix the Tower Climber game based on your suggestions. Could you take some time and play it again? Here is the link again: Tower Climber - Roblox

I would really love it if you could join the games community server where you can get updates on the game and provide even more suggestions. The server is on the game page!