recently i made a game its about capture the flag i hope all try it 
[[NEW] Flagiano! - Roblox]
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You may want to mention why it didn’t suite you. Where did he go wrong? What can be improved upon?
My Feedback:
Music was Holloween-y. It didn’t really fit the time of year.
There were a lot of free models. You basically just took the free template and added free models. There is nothing wrong with that, but I suggest making them more your own by building your own assets.
There was no tutorial. It wasn’t that hard figuring out what to do, but for some people it may be.
I enjoyed the style of the game, but you may want to make it more your own.
Best of luck!
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I’m sorry for being harsh but my honest opinion is that I hate it. The music spooky for some reason. The entire game itself was a Roblox template which is something you never want to do nowadays. Templates are all very outdated and nobody finds much fun playing them.
And now for the models.
The models are all just free models. I don’t see anything that could possibly belong to you. The bricks still have studs. Which is fine if that’s your style but the problem is that it is most definitely is not your style from what I can see in the other models.
1/10 game. I can see effort was put into the game but that still won’t change my mind.
Maybe make it more of your own, not a mess of other people’s
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