I recently made a small game and I’d like some feedback for it.
Bare in mind the game is not supposed to look good and it is also supposed to be a small project just to get me used to scripting and building again since I took a break.
Also this does not work for mobile just yet, I’ll try and find a way.
Game: (8) Fall down the stairs - Roblox
(Open link in new tab to play)
Controls: R to ragdoll.
Also something else I forgot to mention: Is this game worth sponsoring?
The game looks nice to me! Maybe try putting all the structures a bit closer so that you don’t have to walk that much and try decreasing the amount of stairs by making them bigger so that some devices can run the game better. The ragdoll script works really good!
Sure I will definitely try doing that, thanks for the feedback too 
This is fine
Pretty good for a ragdoll game! I do recommend adding a couple more unique ways to use your ragdoll on rather than just stairs 
And making the structures a bit more closer as well
Pretty good Ragdoll game! I like how you can just spam R without a cooldown. Somethings you might wanna add are maybe paths to the stairs and maybe a soundtrack so it gives the game a bit more life.
Will definitely consider doing that thanks for the feedback! Except I’m not very good at making paths and I’m not sure how to.
Just use a flat part and connect that to the main hub and use gap fill to cover up the spaces between the parts making the path.
how did you play the vid?
mine are downlaodable
Also something else I forgot to mention: Is this game worth sponsoring?
What other unique ways can you think of as I have no ideas right now.
It is not. Maybe try adding more objects and stuff.
Maybe
Washing Machine
Catapult
Huge Cliff
Rocket Ship that attaches to you & flies up
Getting hit by certain objects
Just some ideas I guess lol