Any sorts of feedback is welcome!
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Amazing it can use some effects though.
Thanks for the feedback! I just want it to be simple as of right now but I do have i5k’s gfx pack to do effects 
The rendering and terrain looks pretty good, but in my opinion, I feel like the characters need to be lit up. They look too dark. Also if possible, light up the terrain a little bit more. Other than that, great job!
Can you lighten up an hdri? Because it’s a hdri.
Its a cool Gfx but the two characters are very dark, could you possibly add more detail to their clothing
Honestly the idea is amazing! The whole GFX is amazing!
The one thing I would change is, maybe add better lighting, also the background doesnt really match with the idea, it just looks like you slapped a mountain picture from google onto the background! Other then that it’s amazing!
It’s an hdri so it gives the render a more realistic lighting feel, yes I do need to lighten up the characters. What would you recommend I use for a background?
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the characters have detail on their clothing it’s just the fact I shot it from that angle and yea the lighting is pretty dark.
Oh sorry! I couldn’t really see it as its quite dark
No it’s fine lol. You can’t see the front of the characters clothing where the most of the detail is. No need to apologize!
Maybe you could try a city background with characters, and you and the murder would walk in an ally
That’s actually not a bad idea! I like it 
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agreed (30 characters…)
I liked the lighting a lot. It’s really cool
Looks really good, it works very well! However the character on the left I cant see too well, personally I’d either light it up a bit more or change the position
Yea, the problem is that, I wanted to get a shot where you could see both of them holding the guns. I guess I need to improve my lighting 
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