Feedback for my Time Stop ability

Hey developers!

I recently decided to work on an old project which was inspired off the manga series/shōnen Jojo’s Bizarre Adventure, where I was trying to replicate the famous “Za Warudo”, which stops time with cool effects.

What do you guys think? Here is a comparison with the original idea from the anime adaptation:

And my work:

All type of suggestions are appreciated! I might answer pretty late, as I am really busy right now. (PS: The time stop animation nor the voicelines were supposed to showcase a canon scene. This is all a fabrication made off by my creative imagination :crazy_face:)

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It looks pretty good! I made one like yours before but sadly it’ll mostly have a bug which you kills a player and they respawn or they just reset your self which makes the player respawn and doesnt look realistic. Great job!

Looks very good, and looks like a very intriguing and creative system, amazing job and if your making this for a game it looks like a really good system for the game.

That ability from Jojo’s is really cool. I would love to see a game where it has that feature in it. Do you have any other abilities from Jojo’s?

the time stop animation is nonexistent?i dont see the hands doing that motion when time stop

I do.

I re-created the Universe Reset from Part 6, I won’t go in depths too much incase you didn’t watch Stone Ocean and I wouldn’t want to spoil you.

I could however showcase my UR ability later on!

If I understood your question correctly, the animation played by the user (me) on my video isn’t supposed to showcase something canon.

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Thank you! I appreciate the feedback :grin:

I’d like to start a game around the Jojo genre, though I’d like to finish up my UNDERTALE project first and maybe get funds before starting it.

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Thank you!

I see, making a good Time Stop ability is kind of complicated, especially if your game uses values to determine if the players are stunned, etc. I wish you goodluck!

ok i see, i just thought it would look better if he stomped or punched the air or whatever

The effects are good but the delay for time stop is kinda long
If you are trying to make a PVP game I would suggest making it shorter
But if you are making it a showcase/testing game it would be cool