Need criticism/useful information on this game trailer I made a while ago!
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Excellent, for the most part, maybe put some more sound effects in the trailer, rather than just bullet sound effects.
Amazing trailer 
! Really cool and reminds me of the Arsenal trailers.
Brilliant! I love it a lot! However, as @BenzGamingz has stated, put some more sound effects like grunting and screaming! Also, watching the trailer again, inside the home is orange sunlight, whereas outside, the sun highlights, rather than give off a colour (does that make sense?) so maybe make the inside of the house highlight rather than make it orange. Sorry if you don’t understand, I’m not exactly the best with explaining 
Other than that, this is a beautifully made animation with a lot of potential! I couldn’t stop watching it, it attracted me lots and if there is a game, I’l definitely play! Massive well done to you! 
It’s great for sure, but i think it is not going to be allowed in roblox platform cuz umm…blood makes it pretty graphical
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I made a seperate version for the game trailer, getting rid of gore.
It looks great. There isn’t much criticism needed, maybe try adding a more focus on 00:10 and 00:11, as it seems a bit blurry even when it tried to focus, but it could’ve been on purpose.
Explosion scared the camera into unfocusing for a second
The roll he does looks kind of weird, and in the start, there is a bit too much blur. But for the most part this is an amazing trailer. Good job.
Woahhh! This such a sick trailer. I think you did an amazing job, you should definitely do some more. I’m sure you could get some big games’ attention.