Hey! I like posting my art here because the feedback is overwhelming, so thank you all so much for your uplifting posts. I’ve worked on quite a few, so I’ve gifted you all with more than 1 to judge !
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(1) Render
Perhaps you could remove the mag on the weapon assuming you were trying to go for a reloading action and tone down a little bit of the glossiness of the character.
Otherwise it looks pretty good!
(2) Render
I’d presume this is some sort of Easter egg hunt? The environment is nice, but it’s not telling me whole a lot of what you’re trying to portray.
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Hi! For your suggestion about (1), I have noted it, and have moved it lower slightly, I think it looks alot better, thank you for your feedback!
For (2), It was a commission for an Egg game, I was given exact specifics and those models, and was told to create something like that. My finished product (above) was deemed ‘perfect’ and ‘exactly what I had in mind’ by the client, though I can clearly understand where you are coming from. I think some noted feedback could be done through Text Art/VFX.
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First GFX is really great on terms of depth of field. The character needs to be a lot less glossier though since it ruins the look. Second one is also good but it needs a lot more lighting. If they are glossy from the left then there should be a sun lighting up on the whole environment from the left. Good luck with your GFX!