Hey guys! I made this thumbnail as a commission, and it was really fun to make. Anything I should change with the thumbnail, or anything I can improve in?
All feedback is welcomed! 
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It looks good, but I think the lighting is a bit too bright
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I’ll fix that in future GFXs, although the theme of the thumbnail was supposed to be bright. 
Yes, and maybe the bloom too. I suggest changing the color of the lighting to a more yellowish and lowering down the bloom.
Other than that, Its really good!
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Its a bit to bright, I’d suggest making it less bright.
Also, the characters should probably be more spread out and the posing is repetative and sometimes boring.
Also, I’d recommend adding DOF and getting rid of the bloom effect.
Overall, I’d make it less bright, get rid of bloom, make the characters more spaced out (some in the back etc), and fixing some of the posing.
Other then that good job! 
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So the bright lighting really does make this stand out as if it were a bright summer day. Although I find the building in the background to be a little dull and the windows somewhat unrealistic.
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It looks good, well done! 
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Looks great except the lighting, it’s too bright.