[FEEDBACK] Graphic Design Render

Hello, I am Veiiex. I make GFX designs in my spare time and I am looking for feedback on my latest project before I go further. A lot my friends are not really GFX designers and it’s hard to gauge on their feedback.

Looking to improve on ares related to design and layout. What attracts you the most to it, what doesn’t.

Thank you!

GFX:

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Hey,

This render is amazing but only thing that I don’t like about this is hair is not perfectly placed. I can see a black line between the hair and the head.

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this look great, only thing is that his shirt details looks very pixalated and the legs bend wierdly

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Sorry for the messy sketch below, but…

I don’t understand how the sun is to the right, yet it’s reflecting off the arm to the left. Even if the sun was behind him, it wouldn’t highlight this area.

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The render is quite good, other than the pixelated head, the leg that goes over the characters beltimage and the shirt is very pixelated. It is also quite bright where the head is, you could decrease the light just a bit. image I’m also adding on that the camera angle of which you took a photo of the render could have been done just a bit lower, it looks as if the character is very short, you could have increased this to make the render look better.

I agree with your opinion as well, it is quite confusing how there is light to the left arm that is faced in a different direction of the light source.

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