That looks very good but I don’t know why some of the man is pink. Just does not really suite the theme.
Just a light effect for that guy , just help for highlight
Change from pink to white, might fit with the theme more yet still keep the highlight. And deepen the contrast on it.
The accent highlighting, in this case the pink, is used frequently by GFX artists to emphasise characters or certain elements of a scene. For that reason, I like it.
I must agree with the sentiment that pink is perhaps not the right colour, though. Maybe a light orange, which would go well with the twilight background. Personally, I would add a second such light to the left side, but not as strong and perhaps a different colour. That is optional.
he looks like his arms are getting ripped off, theres a space between his legs and lower torso; which looks weird, and the pink dosen’t look good. what is he standing on? random black goop? you should make it look like a mountain or something.
tdlr; bad lighting choices, bad posing, bad background
overall : 3/10
Requires much but thanks for suggestions
I will make another one better than this one