[FEEDBACK] Homestore City build

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#1

Editing all of this to keep you guys updated on all of the changes that I have made.

  • I changed the sky to better fit the build that I was going for
  • I Surrounded the build in a futuristic/cyberpunkish wall (give me tip on improving this plz)
  • I removed the two bland building in the previous version and replaced them with one larger building matching the homestore, and a entrance to a subway type area.

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#2

I like it, I do not think it needs any work :smiley:

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#3

This is looking fantastic! Your use of color and lighting really sets the mood well.

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#4

This is a really nice build, you should add more vegetation or structures like benches,
I also think i found a mistake right here you should fix this, other than that really nice build! :happy3:
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#5

Boo! :ghost:
Many of the buildings look like they took less than ten (10) minutes to create.
Example:
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These two buildings really have nothing going on. They are a bunch of parts thrown together to create a ā€˜buildingā€™.
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I would suggest removing this logo.
Your city background looks unrealistic for these types of buildings.
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You have an error here.
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Another one here.
The streets look really boring. Try ā€˜spicingā€™ them up.
Other than that, it looks great.
Everything stated in this post is merely based upon my opinion. You should not feel disheartened or feel the need to change everything stated here. This is just feedback. It may seem really constructive, but only the best designers have received the worst criticism for their designs.
Sincerely,
FallinqSnowFlake :upside_down_face:

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#6

The build looks nice and smooth, but it looks a bit empty on some part of the buildings.image
Iā€™d try adding ā€œoutlinesā€ (I donā€™t know the correct term) on the glass to give it some extra detail. There are some minor mistakes like a floating part -

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You can also try adding supporting structures to give it some extra detail. Iā€™ve made something like this before you want to check it out. :smiley:

#7

Really nice build! While I do like the style of what youā€™re going for, I suggest deleting or replacing the city decal in the background of the build, as your build seems perfectly fine as it is. Or if you donā€™t want to replace it, I also suggest adding some modeled buildings in the back to give it some depth. Other than that, good work!

#8

Really nice Iā€™d have to say it get ride of the Roblox brick get your own custom one and add some signs. Good work over all tho, John.

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#9

Lighting and the outside of the buildings look great, but the inside just looks empty and plain. Maybe try adding some furniture. And maybe not using the brick texture quite as much.
Looks great overall! :slight_smile:

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#10

Yeah that will be completely gone, using a different sky

#11

I am adding some benches and such, not sure about vegetation though.

#12

Hello! This is a very nice build! Great work! I have a suggestion:

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The lighting right here looks very odd.

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#13

It might be the color choice, what do you think could fix it?

#14

The thing is, the lighting looks a bit off, how there is only a circle of light in the corner then it goes to darkness, nothing really with the color choice. But Iā€™m not sure how you would go about fixing it though.

#15

Really good! Good job, keep it up! Currently working on a home store as well, love the faces and small details.

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