FEEDBACK I need feedback on this Adventure Map

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Any Feedback Helps!

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#2

I cannot see the screenshots

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#3

Sorry, about that. I just fixed it. @AmusingDev

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#4

Aesthetics

I really like the layout and design of the creation in the second image, it looks mystical and secretive. I would suggest changing the lighting to a more realistic and warm lighting to match the scene. I would also recommend trying to make the UIs slightly better (e.g. Make it look like a scroll).

Overall, I really like it.

#5

Okay, I also think the lighting should be changed I just put it like that so I could see a bit more.

#6

The game link is: Massive Map Game - Roblox if you wanna check it out.

#7

Had a nice walk round and swam to the island and jumped off the top of the waterfall and found a dark cave that was brown inside and disconnected.
I did enjoy my walk and swim.

#8

:smiley: Thanks for checking it out.

#9

Amazing work! I love the terrain and the builds

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#10

Looks amazing! The only thing is adding some(just a few) plants, ferns, trees in some more open and “empty” spaces.

Overall though, I love it and it’d be an amazing game. As someone mentioned, the UI(in my opinion) should be a bit more enhanced with design.

-Tin

#11

There are many trees, ferns, plants, but I meant more like, detail, for example, on the bridge, you could add some stains or something on it.

#12

Thanks for the feedback I will be changing the UIs as asked for also I’m adding bushes ferns ect.

#13

Aight, sounds good!

Thanks for using my feedback, anytime.

#14

look cool and also look adventure for my taste but do put a new feature or you use plugins???

#15

I used some plugins. But mostly I built

#16

I suggest you change the color of the river water and add more detail to buildings such as in the 3rd photo. Other than that, it looks great to me:)

#17

Thanks for the feedback @nymfhet

#18

Cool Adventure Map! Make it more attractive though so more people may appreciate it!
I appreciate the map you made because it really looks nice and awesome for an adventure game!

#19

Looks really nice! I love the terrain, modern.

#20

I think this looks really unique and fun. It would definitely draw my attention and make me want to play. Good job! :))