SneltEpic
(Snelt)
November 11, 2020, 6:32pm
#1
Hey developers !
I’m currently buildings some stuff for my game and I have made an little supposed to be a secret obby in it.
I tried to decorate it and I want your feedback on what can I add or fix.
Here is the beginning part :
and here is the second part :
PS : I tried to add particles to the pipes but I couldn’t figure out how to make them fall
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SneltEpic
(Snelt)
November 11, 2020, 6:48pm
#3
yeah I know that I’m not that much good in buildings (started seriously probably since few weeks).
Should I add more textures or just some more stuff in order to fill the room ?
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SneltEpic
(Snelt)
November 11, 2020, 6:50pm
#5
okay I’ll do that !
Thanks for your reply !
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Roblozinko
(dQw4w9WgXcQ)
November 11, 2020, 7:24pm
#6
I love it! I don’t really see much wrong, except the “Obby” sign is so bright I can’t really make out what it says. Keep up the good work!
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Looks simple.
I suggest trying low poly style to make it look modern!
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Reminds me of that game Flood Escape but with lava.
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Derscribe
(Derscribe)
November 11, 2020, 7:39pm
#9
It looks cool
I’d tell you to add more detail but I’m not one to specify what detail is
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SneltEpic
(Snelt)
November 11, 2020, 8:55pm
#10
I understand but I want to know what detail I’m missing in my builds
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ColdGlion
(ColdGlion)
November 11, 2020, 9:07pm
#11
The walls could use to more detail and the obby sign would be better with less neon.
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SneltEpic
(Snelt)
November 11, 2020, 9:17pm
#12
I already change the neon sign and you gave me an idea for the walls
Thanks you !
You could make like more fun, just like make skeletons or just lava drops from above!
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