Feedback - Lava Obby

Hey developers !
I’m currently buildings some stuff for my game and I have made an little supposed to be a secret obby in it.
I tried to decorate it and I want your feedback on what can I add or fix.

Here is the beginning part :

and here is the second part :

PS : I tried to add particles to the pipes but I couldn’t figure out how to make them fall

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yeah I know that I’m not that much good in buildings (started seriously probably since few weeks).
Should I add more textures or just some more stuff in order to fill the room ?

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okay I’ll do that !
Thanks for your reply !

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I love it! I don’t really see much wrong, except the “Obby” sign is so bright I can’t really make out what it says. Keep up the good work! :+1:

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Looks simple.
I suggest trying low poly style to make it look modern!

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Reminds me of that game Flood Escape but with lava.

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It looks cool

I’d tell you to add more detail but I’m not one to specify what detail is

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I understand but I want to know what detail I’m missing in my builds

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The walls could use to more detail and the obby sign would be better with less neon.

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I already change the neon sign and you gave me an idea for the walls
Thanks you !

You could make like more fun, just like make skeletons or just lava drops from above!

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