I have recently built a small lighthouse showcase on Roblox a few months ago, though, I’m still stuck on what else to add to my build to make it stand out from the one lighthouse in the middle. Any criticism and suggestions would be greatly appreciated - thank you.!
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Got a link? Tried searching your name on the site and apparently it’s blocked by the filters.
First things first, you may want to Anchor those Parts!!
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Apologies, fixed the build! Try going in now.
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Alright, rejoin the game and this time it should anchor!
I love it, great work! 
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Probably a glitch, i’ll look into it.
Okay. Great work overall! <3
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A few critiques:
The roof/glass at the top is transparent on some Parts and not on others.
The windows seem pretty large and very bright. They are brighter than the lighthouse light itself.
Have you considered using something like Studio Build Suite? https://www.roblox.com/library/260276858/Studio-Build-Suite
You can make one side of the lighthouse, copy it, and then use the Rotate tool around a center Part to copy/paste the remaining 5 sides. This might allow you to build one sloped side at the same angle all the way up.
SBS also allows you to select Parts and resize them from the center so when you make a side you can build the 4 sloped Parts at the same angle, then resize each higher piece slightly narrower until it fits the next ‘step’ up, and add your wedges to each side.
Do you have Outlines turned on because I can see each Part edge. If you turn it off then those edges will disappear.
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Alright, thanks for the feedback. I’ll take that into account and make some changes.
The lighthouse looks overall good what you did here is pretty nice! I would recommend one thing. Try to resize the lighthouse body and the door a bit don’t make them the door very oversized however it will give it a good look to it!
Lighthouses usually stand alone and sometimes have a building connected to it or next to it. In my opinion, by looking at a few lighthouses myself is what I would use since you have more opportunities to add detail I’ll try making it taller and try having a taller shape to it because at the moment the building size is pretty large by looking at the real life, lighthouses they usually have a more proper window like the ones that are in the front of the building maybe add some color to the dome such as a red or a black kinda color.
The lighthouse could use some more improved windows and improvements on the shape. Lighthouse walls are slightly inclined to create a more cone shape. You could add a place to walk next to the beacon. (fences or some rails around the walking area). I feel like you should add the interior such as the stairs so people can walk in the above part of the walk area.
You should add bushes, flowers, buildings anything else to make the build not look to empty.
Nice lighthouse though.
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I understand where you’re coming from ad will make large adjustments to the lighthouse, as well as making an interior. This was a rushed build so I did not have much time to change a lot as I was busy at the time, your feedback is appreciated and will be used, thanks again for the suggestions.