Hey guys I made a quick little low poly school and I wanted to know what I can do better about it.
- What do you think I can do to improve it.
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If that’s your first or second time doing low poly I would say it’s not bad, but if you’ve made more than about 10 time then I’ll say a meh, the biggest problem for me is that the trees are not so original because everyone uses this style, and it’s a bit too blank. That’s all and nothing much for other things. Other than that it looks great
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Okay first of all, I would suggest removing the part where you ask for the price.
- How much do you think its costs
- 7.1 Do not create topics asking how much you should sell assets for; these will be considered spam.
Aesthetics
I like the fact that you made the build low poly, but there are a few parts that I would suggest changing. The first part is the island, personally, I think that you could made the grass slightly bigger because at the moment I think that the border/ground around the grass is too thick. The second thing is the trees, I would recommend using a variety of different low poly trees.
Overall, great low poly school build.
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I agree on what you’re saying!! Since a lot of people use these kinds of trees and if he wants it to stand out then he should make an original kind of tree
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You cannot ask for price here, so I will not be stating that.
Secondly, you should try lowering the water leveling in the grounds surface, increase the small tree in the front sizing, decrease the playground equipment in the front sizing, increase details to the build overall. To increase the details, you could add door handles, door frames, window frames extended outwards, wall frames, detail the path with stones or rocks, and make the water transparent at a point.
It looks nice but i feel like its kinda boring.
Looks good but It seems kind of plan, try showing it with shadow map on next time
It’s not bad. Trees look a bit simple and could use some work. I would also add some foliage around the building.
At its current state, it would be difficult to estimate a fair price. Spend a little more time on detailing the map area and maybe it will improve the value.
It looks good, but it’s a little dull, the building itself is good for low-poly, but I say you add a bit of bloom since it’s low poly, and also maybe add some flowers around? 7/10 (in my opinion)
Really enjoying how it’s turning and how well put together it is! 
My suggestions would be…
- More decorations would improve the appearance of plain detail.
- Adding further scenery assets would make the environmental presence very positive.
- Change of color throughout the building so it balances / becomes equivalent.