This is the first low-poly vehicle I built using only the Roblox engine, any feedback is appreciated!
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I like it, I think that it looks really nice. There are 3 things I would change if it were up to me.
- The front windshield.
It’s oddly specific, but most school bus front windshields do not have a separator between them. Usually, that is how city buses and buses without front places. And if the buses have those separators, they are usually black and much thinner than that.
Ex:
I get it, it’s a bit nit picky but I think that fixing it can benefit you.
- Bus Door
The bus door is structured a bit weird, The lines continue onto the door and there are only 2 small windows on it. Usually, the bus doors do not continue those lines because they are metal beams. Also, most doors have either 2 long windows or 4 small windows, both pictured below:
Finally, the front of the vehicle seems quite long and large from how a bus usually is. This makes the bus look janky and odd. Here’s a nice angle to compare to your model:
It’s not bad, not at all. I think that if you push it back and make it a bit smaller then it will look great.
Overall, I think that it looks really good and I would love to see this being used in the future.
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It looks okay at its state now, but you can certainly improve on it.
1. A Stop Sign:
One thing that I don’t see is a ‘Stop’ Sign on the school bus. With most school buses (especially the iconic yellow ones) there is always a stop sign attached.
2. Name at the top:
If you look at the top of the bus, you can see the word “School”. I may be a little picky here, but usually, it’s "School bus" not just "School.
Conclusion:
I can’t think of anything else that isn’t listed or needs improvement, just add those minors details that I’ve listed and it should look a lot better.
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The from part with the supposed “engine” looks a bit too big, I suggest making it smaller. If your confused I mean this part:
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