Hello everyone, I have now finished the the low poly island and added another island.
My First One
And Here is the Finished One
I am wondering if i can improved my finished one.
Any Feedback would be appreciated
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There is a vast improvement in quality between the before and after the island. Overall, I got a few suggestions that you could try adding to your build the second island with the lighthouse on it, I feel like it’s a bit too small in my opinion you could try making it a bit taller and add more detail to it I’ll add the cupola to your lighthouse so it could cover the lantern i see that’s missing.
The one thing that seems out of place is the color of the door, it seems weird because it is the same color as the grey parts on the lighthouse try choosing a different color for the door and try adding a (door handle). Perhaps adding some flowers or rocks on the other island maybe.
It’s a very nice piece of work and really good for improving it.
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With the whole island established, it looks quite amazing! Low-poly design is perfect, matches well with the island theme.
The idea of the lighthouse is a cool touch too, compliments the first island.
As far as improvements, I would look into resizing the boat, and shaping the lighthouse more with a taper of some kind. (And a pointy hat roof). The house seems to contain custom meshes, but the lighthouse looks to be almost pure roblox objects. So the styles don’t quite align.
But keep it up! Would be cool to see some type of archipelagos game form from this.
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