[FEEDBACK] Low Poly Ruins Map

I started work on a Low poly Ruins map for quite a while now, and so far I think I’m almost done. All I need is feedback, All models were made by me (except for the torch). This isnt a game, this is just a showcase, that i will be using for a game.

Heres the link to the place: Low Poly Ruins - Roblox

When you join please wait like 8 seconds for the lighting to load in.

Please give me feedback (I know my game isnt perfect, I can feel something misssing)

Also theres 2 modes, darkness and light. Darkness you will need a torch to navigate bc its dark, but to truly see the build, you will need to go on tp pad go to light mode where u can clearly see everything.

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It is quite literally the same pillar and tree model pasted over and over again. It’s certainly a map but it lacks any real flavour or dyanism.

Don’t get me wrong – the pillar and tree models look stunning, but some variation would make everything a lot better. Create a place out of them – don’t just spatter them across some flat terrain or it will end up being too bland.

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I see, There were also a few broken pillars in there. Ill try to make some pillars with the top or sides chipped off.

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I dont see it low poly but i still like ur work, after all i see a great potencial here :slight_smile:

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Try using a range of materials and colors, rather than just a few dark and plain colours.

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Looks nice, you can maybe try adding some rocks along the path or throughout the area.

The lighting needs much more smoothing out, try adding some fog and bloom to add a bit more of an environment to the place. Also make it darker, even when the moon is shining directly it is not that bright. Add a slight tint of blue to the ambience.

Exactly what im trying to do. I have no idea how to do that. I need bloom which i think i could do. But fog i couldn’t find anything on, if u have anything that could help with fog link it here

Here’s how you enable and adjust fog: Documentation - Roblox Creator Hub

@Solar_Wraith I have now implemented fog and lighting. I don’t know if I should tweak the fog or the color correction. Also I removed the night (darkness) but if you suggest that the night time theme is better than daytime I’ll revert back to night theme. Also if you have a suggestion with weather (rain, windy, normal) tell me. I might start experimenting with rain. (I wrote this before u sent me the link to enable fog, Idk if my fog is the same kind of fog in the link)
closed link, dont want any feedback until im done with what im working on

Later today, ill be adding:

Different pillars
Weather
Some more vegetation ( Grass, maybe a new tree)
Tweak Placement of some pillars