Hello, there fellow developer! So I have created some posts on a Lobby of mine 2 weeks ago and I got some impressive feedback, and I liked the suggestions and things to change or remove on it, and so I did. After those 2 weeks of development, I and my friend @Coloris_m have created and scripted some interesting things for a future game of ours, so I would appreciate some feedback on 3 maps!
The game name is Noob Defense, and we’re currently in development as of now!
As a defense map it seems neat and old fashioned (not in a bad way). I’d personally consider adding more variety to the paths and elevation changes. Maybe even consider using mesh parts to create terrain formations like rocks/cliffs/etc. . <3
the map looks really clean. the Dead ahead looks clean but it is not clean when it has a lot of cactus around the map so can you low the limit of the cactus it looks to many for a map and also the last map and it was “Forest”.
You can put some mushrooms, dead logs, flowers and also any kind of wildlife that related to the forest themes.
that all for now and I will see you in the next reply…
Seeya!
its quite interesting to say the least I think that the lighting is a plus and also the water settings I would recommend adding more details like maybe a plane in the sky etc. also I love the style its a mix of realistic lighting and water but also adding a cartoonish feel which I believe is original also try to find a different style for the cactus like maybe 3 different ones and duplicate them in the map to add a little mix also try to decrease the amount of cactuses in the map I feel like its to repetitive maybe add a good amount of space in between anyways I gtg I wish the best luck to your game!!
This map is classic but got a premium look as well. I am not complaining about that since it’s a tower defense map. But I can see you got a lot of trees which you should reduce. Thanks that’s all.
Nice map. I love the mix of cartoonish and a classic Roblox look to the different maps really sets a nice feel to the areas that could be improved, in my opinion:
The desert map is far too plain and looks repetitive. They look all the same, I like the rotating, and their size is pretty decent but you could add larger ones if needed. The area could have some small homes. Although this is intentional, it feels in my opinion odd since they’ve essentially been reproduced with your own makeover I think it still looks good maybe try throwing a bit more into the map.
Regarding the forest it has a nice open area to it i’ll place more objects throughout the map. Forgive me if this is untrue. All of the trees that are placed on the map look the same ([] -shaped leaves.) This style of a classic design is alright. I recommend making various types of trees and using other objects/plants to fill up the ground area (as trees are in the real world). Good use of rocks and cactus to create a natural element.
That’s most of the stuff I found. I also want to reiterate that I think the other maps are really good as it is, but it can definitely be better great build.
