FEEDBACK Modern office. (first try)

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#1

Hey guys I would like to know what I could do better for this office I made. If you could tell me theses.

  1. What do you think of it.
  2. Flaws in the build. Things I could add.
  3. If you were to buy this would you?

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#2

It looks good but really empty, try adding paintings on walls and plants like this: image

#3

This build looks great! I like the color theme, and how the style remains the same throughout. :happy2:
My suggestions would consist of…

  • Adding some kind of greenery/plants that way it doesn’t seem too plain or empty.
  • Highly recommend the use of more props because the build would seem more full and not as bland.
  • Adding some form of colors so there is a mixture throughout the entire build, which can also distract the viewer from it being empty.
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#4

Positives

  • The build has a good structure and shape.

  • The lighting is OK

  • The furniture itself is great

Feedback

This build has a lot of room for improvement…

  • The office is bland, if I were to work there I probably wouldn’t be so happy. It’s pretty monotone, and if you were aiming to portray a boring, plain office, I think you did well. You must add colour to the build such as plants or anything, really.

  • The lighting is… Well it’s alright, for a beginner. But it’s monotone and has a dull, dead feel to it. The build sometimes reminds me of a hospital waiting room.

I hope you can yield the feedback and improve the build, you have great potential.

#5

Play with the lighting more, it doesn’t look nice when there’s random shadows on the floor

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#6

I like it, it’s looks very quiet and pretty. Nice work! :+1:

#7

As people have stated before, potted plants, paintings, and contrast colors would work amazingly well with a map like this. It reminds me of CS:GO’s Agency map, which is a good thing, I guess. :ok_hand:

#8

This is awesome, but it is very empty like some said already, Add plants, TVs, coffee, cubical offices, receptionist/front desk, and paintings. Otherwise this is pretty good, the floors are pretty bland and so are some walls. I hope you take our feedback and improve it! :+1:

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#9

Thank you for the feedback Im working on it right now and adding paintings, plants and more as we speak. Im post the new photos soon. Thank you for the great feedback!

#10

It looks great for a first try! I suggest you experiment with more textures/materials, shades of colors and lighting as the walls, the floor and the ceiling looks like they’re blending in. You can upload and use your own textures if default materials doesn’t satisfy. GLHF!

#11

The building is awesome, just not my style. My style is a low poly and a detailed build. This build reminds me like it’s lazily made or unfinished, which I’m sure you spent your time and didn’t do it lazily. I highly recommend looking for inspiration, etc, I recommend, add better lighting. :slight_smile: