Feedback my animation


it’s not very good, but I think it’s good for someone who’s just starting to animate. i need Feedback

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I would make it faster, it almost looks choppy and robotic. With practice it will all come together, it’s a wonderful start.

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For a beginner I’d say it’s quite the start.

I find it surprising that you’re using a Robloxian 2.0 R15 model since the default that many animators use is the usual Block Rig R6, do not let that deter you. Those who use R6 have less limbs to animate and focus their energy on fluidity at the cost of unnatural look. The R15 poses major improvements with elbows and hands however it takes more frames or “points” to make it look realistic and normal. This animation is a start, not terrible, not great. Good enough for a first animation.

I would speed up the animation by around x0.5 - x0.8 more and add more animation “points” rather than just 4.

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